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SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS - Expert & Affordable!
Would you like an independent opinion of your script, with an honest assessment of it’s strengths and weaknesses?
Do you prefer frank and uncensored comments about your writing, to assist you in the re-writing process? Are you looking for
specific suggestions on how to improve the script, trouble-shoot problems or enhance the plot?
AWS screenplay
analysts have years of experience providing coverage, and are entertainment industry professionals. Several analysts
have written script coverage for Sony Pictures Entertainment, Icon Productions, New Line Cinema, Spyglass Entertainment,
Warner Bros., MGM, Miramax, Disney, Nickelodeon, ABC, Tri-Star, ICM; as well as the Academy of Motion Pictures, Nicholl Fellowship.
Some AWS analysts are WGA members, and have produced/sold/optioned their own screenplays; one holds an M.F.A.
degree in screenwriting from UCLA; another holds an M.F.A. degree in film production from Loyola Marymount University; another
holds an M.F.A. degree in dramatic writing from NYU Tisch School of the Arts, and a B.A. in Cinema Studies from U.C.S.B.
All analysts sign non-disclosure agreements.
Please email PDF files only. WGA Registered/copyright
scripts preferred. Your Screenplay Analysis is 100% Guaranteed.
Turnaround time is up to 14 days
(depends on how busy we are), with option of rush overnight service.
Email Script to: erin@awardwinningscreenwriters.com
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...20% Off our Standard Price! Get a 3-Page Analysis for only $49!
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3-Page Screenplay Analysis
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RUSH Overnight Service - only available on 3-page Analysis - check with us in advance for availability
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3-Page
Screenplay Analysis includes: logline, synopsis, analysis of strengths and weaknesses in plot, dialogue, character,
and originality; and a ratings chart. Turnaround time is up to 14 days.
24-Hour RUSH Overnight
Service is available by appointment only, as it depends on availability of Analyst. Only available for the 3-page
Analysis. Check with us in advance for scheduling and availability.
6-Page Development Notes
includes: logline, synopsis, detailed analysis of strengths and weakness in plot, dialogue and character; originality and
commercial potential; ratings chart; and detailed page notes with suggestions on MPAA rating/budget/demographics, plot
development, character arcs, and actors envisioned for lead roles. Turnaround time is up to 14 days.
AWS
SCREENPLAY ANALYSTS
Jeremy Bonner received an M.F.A. degree in Screenwriting
from UCLA in 2007 - winning the Harmony Gold Award In Excellence and Jay Grossman Award two years running. He currently
teaches the course for the UCLA Discovery Program in Screenwriting, and has worked in the story departments of established
production companies (including Sidney Kimmel Entertainment and Concorde-New Horizons), and has been a script doctor on a
number of projects. He has optioned his own scripts numerous times. Jeremy has impeccable taste, and a clear grasp of
screenplay structure and plot development.
George Klembith holds a B.A. degree in English from UC Berkeley, and has been a judge for the Motion
Picture Academy Nicholl Screenwriting Fellowship since 1995. He reads and critiques over 200 feature scripts every year, and
freelances for Tri-Star, ICM and MGM. George is a published author of several novels: Heaven Within (Bell Rock) and An Invitation
to Sanctuary (Dunhill); and a screenwriter with several produced credits including Rent My Husband, Please (MRG Productions)
and Damien’s Seed (Mystique Films aired on Cinemax). Director of Development with A&M Films and Smilie Films, George
is a master of insight, able to immediately size up a script and cut to the heart of the story, to unveil and enhance its
dramatic core.
Matt Donnelly holds
an M.F.A. degree in film production from Loyola Marymount University in 2004. He began covering feature screenplays at Sony
Pictures in 2002 and has since worked with Warner Brothers and Disney Studios. An active WGA member, Matt has written for
both film and television in a variety of genres, including comedy, drama, and thriller. Along with his coverage experience,
he has served as script coordinator and writer for ABC Studios, for the television show "Brothers & Sisters"
with Sally Field. Matt understands screenplay formatting and structure well, as well as the importance of strong character
development and formidable storytelling.
Chris Simmons - Chris has a B.A. degree
in English from Binghamton University, and has been a Story Analyst for Warner Bros., New Line Cinemas (LOTR, Hobbit 1&2) and
Icon Productions (Mel Gibson). An accomplished writer, he co-developed and served as Story Editor for the award-winning
animated action comedy series "Static Shock", and has written dozens of animated scripts for Disney, Warner Bros.
Animation, and Nickelodeon. He is also an alumnus of the Warner Bros. Comedy Writer’s Workshop. Chris is
well-regarded as an Analyst who has a knack for carefully guiding studio projects through the lengthy rewriting process and
into shape for filming, with "Miss Congeniality," "I Am Legend," and "Analyze This" are
among the movies he helped to successfully launch during his time at Warner Bros.
Ian Weinreich – Ian holds an M.F.A. degree in dramatic writing
from New York University, Tisch School of the Arts, and a B.A. degree in Cinema Studies from U.C.S.B. He has years of experience
working as a screenplay reader and analyst for Miramax Films (No Country for Old Men, Gone Baby Gone, There Will Be Blood);
as well as Spyglass Entertainment (Star Trek, Wanted, Invictus, G.I. Joe: Rise of Cobra).
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